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Here is the photonarative I drew with Illustrator.
Here is the screen play I wrote for my english class. Granted FADE IN on a room with sun streaming through closed curtains. Shot of a clock on with sun across it. It’s 7.30 AM. Pile of laundry on the chair of a fairly messy room. Quiet music playing in the background. In Kitchen: MUM stands at the stove cooking bacon and eggs. Two pieces of toast pop out of the toaster. MUM puts toast bacon and eggs on the plate and puts the plate on the table between a knife and fork. She leaves the room. MUM knocks on door: MUM walks into room and starts putting the clothes into draws. GEORGE slowly pushes himself up. GEORGE is a 17 year old boy/man who seems quiet and MUM: MUM leaves the room after picking up stuff of the floor and putting them on the shelves. BLACK OUT Next room is the kitchen. GEORGE is eating of a plate with toast, eggs and bacon on it. MUM walks into the room carrying a backpack. MUM: GEORGE: GEORGE finishes his breakfast picks up his backpack and heads towards the door. MUM: GEORGE make’s a b-line from heading towards the front door to go towards the bathroom. MUM is driving GEORGE to school. As she drives, GEORGE stares out the window, the pass and intersection with a gas station on the left. GEORGE is sat in a classroom in front of a lecturing teacher, pulling a notebook out of his backpack. GEORGE is at table with two nerdy looking friends. FRANK and SID, who wears thick glasses. They are talking about world of warcraft, arguing. MUM is driving George home. GEORGE is playing world of warcraft on his computer when MUM comes in and calls him for dinner. GEORGE gets up and walks into the kitchen where dinner is on the table waiting for him. MUM is tucking GEORGE into bed. MUM (solftly): GEORGE: MUM: GEORGE: MUM leaves the room. FADE OUT
GEORGE wakes up slowly. The sun has filled the room. GEORGE looks up at the clock. It’s 9.45. GEORGE jumps out of bed and runs to the kitchen. He grabs a bowl out of the cupboard and Drops it. It smashes all over the floor. George stares at the broken bowl for a second, then grabs another one and puts it on the counter. He tiptoes around the shards of bowl to the fridge, opens it and stares inside for a few seconds, look for the milk. He finds it and tiptoes back over to the cupboard leaving the fridge door open. GEORGE grabs the cereal bozo and pours took much cereal into the bowl. He put the cereal box down next to the bowl and grabs the milk. He pours milk over the side and spills some over the side. He puts the milk down on the other side of the bowl and picks up his bowl, knocking the cereal box off the counter in the process, sending cereal flying over the broken bowl. GEORGE sits down at the table and realizes he doesn’t have a spoon. He gets back to the counter and starts opening draws at random. GEORGE is riding his bike to school. His helmet isn’t strapped on. He stops at the junction his mum drives him past everyday. He is obviously lost. He rides over to an old lady how to get to school. She looks at him with a concerned look but point him in the right direction. GEORGE walks into class late. He sits down and looks for his notebook in his backpack. It isn’t there. GEORGE is sat down wearing normal clothes while everyone else is in PE uniform running around. GEORGE is sat at his lunch table with FRANKY and SID. FRANKY and SID are eating their lunches talking. SID: GEORGE: FRANKY: SID(Through a think mouthful of food): FRANKY takes a bite of a PB&J sandwich. GEORGE walks into the bike cage. His bike is gone. He slowly walks home. It is nearly dark out when he gets home. He walks into the house and stands in the kitchen doorway staring at the mess he made this morning. GEORGE is still staring at the mess. He has pushed some of the broke bowl into a pile but has cut his hand. UNCLE TOM calls from the front door He walks into the kitchen and starts. What happened here George? George doesn’t reply. UNCLE TOM GEORGE UNCLE TOM GEORGE UNCLE TOM GEORGE shakes his head slowly. UNCLE TOM Brief clip of UNCLE TOM showing GEORGE how to use a dust pan and brush Brief clip of UNCLE TOM showing GEORGE how to make bacon and eggs. UNCLE TOM and GEORGE sat in front of the TV together. MUM comes through the door MUM UNCLE TOM GEORGE MUM UNCLE TOM. MUM (Smiling): ACT 3: Conclusion FADE IN on a tidy room with streaks of sunshine through the curtains. There is not laundry on the chair. The clock on the wall shows that it’s 7.10 GEORGE is not in his bed. He is in the kitchen carefully setting two plates between two sets of knives and forks. He puts a notebook his PE uniform and a bagged lunch in his backpack. MUM walks into the room. She starts at the sight of GEORGE. She looks at the table and then at the backpack propped against the front door. MUM: GEORGE (obviously proud of himself): MUM: UNCLE TOM (Following MUM into the kitchen): MUM: UNCLE TOM: MUM UNCLE TOM: MUM: UNCLE TOM: UNCLE TOM leave through the front door. GEORGE: MUM: GEORGE waves as he rides down the driveway on a new bike with a lock attached to frame. FADE OUT THE END |
